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(X), right there, marks a bite in the ass, mine of course, for waiting to write
reflections. I now attempt to reflect on a sight-reading of Calvino’s “All At
One Point,” a post-modern story that in five pages depicts otherworldliness and
absurdity. It's a whirlwind to be sure. Here is the danger: I do this for the
audience of my classmates and Dr. Busl, who wrote her dissertation on the
narrative structure of Calvino. Here we go.
Before we begin to read the
narrative, the title and the epigraph offer a setting and a foundation. The
epigraph describes Edwin P. Hubble’s calculations of “the galaxies’ velocity of
recession,” calculations of this recession offer a “moment” when all matter was
“concentrated in a single point” (43), thus “All At One Point.” The narrator,
Qfwfq, begins with “Naturally” (43), an opening that by design we must question.
But, the reader is then thrust into a world that immediately seems anything but
natural, a world without time. The narrator, Qfwfq, also questions space,
“Nobody knew there could be space” (43). How does a narrative work in a setting
so outside our own actual world, a world without time and space? Thomas Pavel suggests
that in creating an APW, the text establishes “a new actual world which imposes
its own laws on the surrounding system. . . In order to become immersed in this
world, the reader must adopt a new ontological perspective” (Ryan 3.1.2).
Calvino creates this APW that seems out of reach, but he hangs it on the
masterplot of a creation story. And so it works. Although there are multiple
characters, time and space for much of the narration is centered upon one point.
There are enough hallmarks of this masterplot, though, that we find comfort in
the recognizable and can therefore immerse ourselves. If not during the first
read, the second. The concepts of time and space become realized upon the
expansion of the point, caused by the generosity of Mrs. Ph(i)Nk0s.
And another APW, one that more closely resembles our own, is created.
Should I have written “bum”?
Ryan, Marie-Laure. “Possible Worlds.” the living handbook of narratology. Interdisciplinary
Center for Narratology, University of Hamburg, 27 Sept. 2013. Web. 15 Feb.
2015.
What about the recognizable elements of the familiar world - the stereotypes we use to describe our immigrant neighbors, for example - and how that creates a dissonance with the creation masterplot?
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Delete350 words is a struggle. And that struggle is real. See (x) marks the spot.
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